The overall front cover and context page link together very nicely. Firstly, the backgrounds are both the same colours, which make the magazine flow very nicely. The fonts used on the front cover look very sophisticated and easy to read (appealing to the eye) the colours of the fonts also sync with the background which makes the front cover look neat. The main image of the girl stands out from the background which is good as it makes her look important and the focal view. The price stands out which is impressive and makes the magazine look cheap because of the word 'only'. The text above the girl is also highlighted it.
The context page is all in line with each other being text and image which looks nice, the images are black and white which makes them stand out, the page numbers are in caps to make them look easy to see so you dont have to search for the magazine.
if i was to give any constructive feedback i would say overall the magazine would have looked nicer with more magazine, text, and range in colours in images and fonts to help get key information shown.
Your magazine cover is great, it is well structured and has a good colour theme which appeals to both girls and boys. You have used simple fonts which make your magazine look sophisticated. You have used all conventions of a typical college magazine and have used the space productively, the only thing i would criticize about your cover is that you're missing a barcode.
Your contents page is good. I like the way you have used the same colour scheme the whole way through. Your contents page is well structured and doesn't look too cluttered. It looks like a real college magazine and the way you have edited it and structured it shows that you have a clear understanding of how to use indesign.
Would like to start off by saying your magazine is very interesting and professional. The images you have selected compliment the magazine to a great deal; Also, the techniques you have used on photoshop (on your cover) make the magazine very professional and suitable to the audience. Your master head and cover line are very clear. A very simple yet eye catching cover! Your contents page too looks very professional and links very well to your cover. However, one thing you could improve on, is your selection of colours. On your contents page where it quotes 'lunches 2 pounds...' you could have maybe gone for a different colour. The background is dark and so is the colour of the text which makes it harder for the audience to see. If you are giving an offer as such in your magazine to promote sales, you need to keep in mind that it needs to stand out. Overall, great cover and contents.
The overall front cover and context page link together very nicely. Firstly, the backgrounds are both the same colours, which make the magazine flow very nicely. The fonts used on the front cover look very sophisticated and easy to read (appealing to the eye) the colours of the fonts also sync with the background which makes the front cover look neat. The main image of the girl stands out from the background which is good as it makes her look important and the focal view. The price stands out which is impressive and makes the magazine look cheap because of the word 'only'. The text above the girl is also highlighted it.
ReplyDeleteThe context page is all in line with each other being text and image which looks nice, the images are black and white which makes them stand out, the page numbers are in caps to make them look easy to see so you dont have to search for the magazine.
if i was to give any constructive feedback i would say overall the magazine would have looked nicer with more magazine, text, and range in colours in images and fonts to help get key information shown.
Your magazine cover is great, it is well structured and has a good colour theme which appeals to both girls and boys. You have used simple fonts which make your magazine look sophisticated. You have used all conventions of a typical college magazine and have used the space productively, the only thing i would criticize about your cover is that you're missing a barcode.
ReplyDeleteYour contents page is good. I like the way you have used the same colour scheme the whole way through. Your contents page is well structured and doesn't look too cluttered. It looks like a real college magazine and the way you have edited it and structured it shows that you have a clear understanding of how to use indesign.
Would like to start off by saying your magazine is very interesting and professional. The images you have selected compliment the magazine to a great deal; Also, the techniques you have used on photoshop (on your cover) make the magazine very professional and suitable to the audience. Your master head and cover line are very clear. A very simple yet eye catching cover! Your contents page too looks very professional and links very well to your cover. However, one thing you could improve on, is your selection of colours. On your contents page where it quotes 'lunches 2 pounds...' you could have maybe gone for a different colour. The background is dark and so is the colour of the text which makes it harder for the audience to see. If you are giving an offer as such in your magazine to promote sales, you need to keep in mind that it needs to stand out. Overall, great cover and contents.
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