Your front cover is really good however, i think your picture should be more zoomed out, and you should keep to one colour scheme. The contents is really good. but its kind of plain. Lastly, i don't like the structure to you DPS and or the fact that theres so many colours. I don't believe it suits you genre.
I think for your front page there is really random colours like the purple is really unnecessary. I really like the simple font on the front cover because it is really easy to read. Your model is appropriate however I believe you could have had your model in a different position. For your content page I believe that theres too much black colour it makes it look dull. I really like the content page, the colours are too much tho.
Your front cover is really good however, i think your picture should be more zoomed out, and you should keep to one colour scheme. The contents is really good. but its kind of plain. Lastly, i don't like the structure to you DPS and or the fact that theres so many colours. I don't believe it suits you genre.
ReplyDeleteI think for your front page there is really random colours like the purple is really unnecessary. I really like the simple font on the front cover because it is really easy to read. Your model is appropriate however I believe you could have had your model in a different position. For your content page I believe that theres too much black colour it makes it look dull. I really like the content page, the colours are too much tho.
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